Animatic Interview

I did this interview so that I can see what an audience would think of my opening title. In doing this I have learnt that I need to change a few shots as this person feels that it is a little repetitive. I think that I need to change the shots repetitive shots to:
1. When I have a close up on the medal I will have a flash back to the medal being put onto the guy, which I think will give a clear idea that he got them
2. I will have a few shots of them being put into the rucksack as this will show that he is leaving again and I think that this will give a clearer understanding of why the soldiers are leaving.
3. I think that it would look very good if I have a few shots of the medals moving on the guy as if he is running OR a shot of them in the rucksack to show that he has left.

I think that this interview has really helped me improve the overall effect of my film, so I am now going to do another interview to make sure that my target audience age feel the same way.

In class we watched each others animatics and we got feel back from them. I and going to take all of these comments into consideration so that I can get the best result in my final film.

Gemma d

Love the narrative and the different sound effects. only this is that the narrative sometimes overlaps the music which makes it hard to hear.

1/18/2012 11:30 AMView Responses

Voice over is really effective! also the music over adds atmosphere! Dialog is too fast at parts and the music over the talking is too loud. Pictures clear and you can tell whats going on.

1/18/2012 11:28 AMView Responses

Good voice over. Gave a good insight into what would be happening in the movie. Music was very good that suited the army theme, made the atmosphere very sad, mixing the music and the voice over was a bit strange because her voice got quite muffled and she is talking to fast.

1/18/2012 11:28 AMView Responses

nice voice over in the background telling the story well and a good animation showing that she is going back in time and telling the story. the sound in the background is quite load when the army images appear which makes it hard to hear exactly what she is saying. Very touching story

1/18/2012 11:28 AMView Responses

Speech a little muffled, due to the speed and the music. But the voice over is good and sets the scene.

1/18/2012 11:28 AMView Responses

good voice over and music used. The drawings are good. The titles are nice. The music might need to be slightly quieter or the voice more clear as the voice gets slightly drowned out.

1/18/2012 11:28 AMView Responses

Very nice voice over, adds to the theme and effect it has on the viewers as it is very personal, some of the sound effects over ride the voice over so maybe tone down them , speaking quite fast so slow down and the message will come across better. But I like the voice over very much.

1/18/2012 11:28 AMView Responses

dialogue mixed sometimes to much with the music, but other than that it was suppppppperb !